Habbo US: Group Home: Habbo Poetry [Remake]

A Love Story

Beautiful eyes open across a pillow top,
It seems for this moment time will stop,
The earth slows and sounds wane,
A frozen moment without stain.

Your body close to mine,
Our hearts beat in time,
With a smile of simple pleasure,
This moment should last forever.

Some say perfection is unattainable
For most things that's explainable,
But in your arms and with your heart's affection
I have found a brief moment of perfection.

-.Gerbinski33.

Connected

There are mountains and miles
And miles of mountains
Roads and rivers
Buildings and trees
All of these things are stuck between you and me
Airplanes can make them go away
None of them stopped us from coming together
Being because we always were connected
We always kept each other close because we always were
It just is and just always was that Which is us so connected
Despite the mountains and miles And the changing states

The wrong of unshapely things
is a wrong too great to be told;
I hunger to build them anew
and sit on a green knoll apart,

With the earth and the sky and the water,
remade, like a casket of gold
For my dreams of your image that blossoms
a rose in the deeps of my heart.

-:TheUndertaker

Numb

Now you want a second chance
To try and make things work again
I’ve had enough of this game
Things will never be the same

Numb

I’ve met someone that actually cares
Someone that’ll always be there
Someone to be my sunshine in the rain
Someone to rid me of my pain

Numb

-Brittaneh

Rose

All things uncomely and broken,
all things worn-out and old,
The cry of a child by the roadway,
the creak of a lumbering cart,

The heavy steps of the ploughman,
splashing the wintry mould,
Are wronging your image that blossoms
a rose in the deeps of my heart.

Apology

My dearest brother! How dare we squabble on this sacred day!
I could never understand the anger weeding your soul,
But everyone knows what this means to me... and to you.
The city streets used to be filled with our laughter.
All I see tonight is hatred! Even now,
The multicolored raindrops have set free
To break our dark meloncholy skys.
So please deny the chimes of war!
Make a pathway in your heart
That the trumphets may sound
Their one year chorus.

We are brothers.
Be Merry.
Be Proud.
,Thane

[Note that each line has one less syllable than the one before it like a countdown]

-Forigner05

We only grew closer still.

-.tay.love.

Dear Mom

I want to thank you mom, for everything you did for me.
Although we cannot look upon your future, we can recall your history.
I need to tell you mom, i'm a grown man now.
Ive settled down, concentrated on life, its a shame your not around.
Can you remember our times, all of which we shared.

Numb

My heart is numb deep inside
It feels as if all hope has died
I’m too familiar with this pain
Why must my love be in vain?

Numb

The security I felt from gazing into your eyes
Is now lost because of the lies
Why did I ever give you a chance?
All that’s left is hopeless romance

Numb

Love is blind and so are you
You can’t see the hell I’ve gone through
Mentally tortured and made a fool
You broke every promise, every rule

Numb

The moment you've all been waiting for:

Our Poetry Contest Winners Are:
1st: Brittaneh
2nd: X..Cone..X
3rd: .tay.love.
4th: Forigner05
5th: .:leiann:.
6th: -=ChickenWing
7th: Freebird35714
8th: SkitzoPenguin
9th: Xx.Armina.xX
10th: stealthy777

[Honorable Mention]
.Gerbinski33.
xtreme247
calsdapal
GotSean?

Congrats everyone and sorry if you didn't make it. If you did not make it, just sign the guestbook and I will try to give you a prize.

Thank you for all your poems! You guys are real poets!

From the times when I was happy, to the times when I was scared.
But I cannot forget your times, when i was there to comfort you.
I'd run up, hold you close, and was determined we could get through.
Mom, you're not here anymore, but your legacy lives on.
Ill never forget you.

All the love,
Your son

-X..Cone..X

Elevant

Then without prediction, started your addiction for an illegal bobba. The bobba was the only thing that made you happy, so hesitantly, I did try to make you stop, but you always refused help.

When the message finally got through, it was to late.

Now,
in the coffin you lay next to grandma, and grandpa, white as bone, under a shadey tree, you lie, dead. I'll miss you, more then you could ever know.

"I love you too, mom."

Apr 4, 2009 5:11:43 AM
Elevant

Always.

You always told me, "I love you." Without a second of thought, I always said a four-word-phrase, "I love you too."

You put me first, repeatedly. I'll never forget when Dad walked out on you. You stayed strong, in front of my young eyes, but I heard your screams, and cries.

Apr 4, 2009 5:07:45 AM
Elevant

OK, before I post this poem/story/etc., I would be very greatful if you didn't call this your own [Im sure other people who have posted a poem/story/etc. on here would feel the same way to.] Also, there are many errors, I do my best to make my writing readable, but sometimes thats not always possible, heh. With that being said: Thankyou.

Apr 4, 2009 4:30:40 AM
Yea,itsSophie

It will never matter...
It doesn't matter How many fragrances you buy
Or how much you earn with in a year
Or even how much you spend with in a day

You still go to bed every night thinking
"What could I have possibly done wrong."
And for that brief moment
"How could I possibly even be happy?"
"He/She was engaged for god sake and he/she didn't even bother to tell me!"
All I knew from that summary was that
It will never matter....

Mar 30, 2009 11:36:05 PM
Yea,itsSophie

Love

Love isn't a play toy to chew like a bone
Love isn't a say where you can say "I Love You."
Love isn't something that will let you just do whatever you want.

Love is something you are passionate for
Love is something you may crave for
Love is something to forgive and recieve
Love is something you need to Cherish

And Love is something that you feel with your heart to another.

Mar 30, 2009 11:31:54 PM
Yea,itsSophie

Saints
Nice and sincere deep inside your heart
You feel a sudden burst of pain
For something You didn't get
How am I supposed to feel better inside?

Saints are the ones like angels
Flying to the rescue to save
Your Heart & Soul
They don't care as long as you're safe

In their arms you feel a sudden shock
And in disbelief you go to bed every night
Crying and wondering who are they?

They were the Saints,
That saved you from the impossible
To the possible.

Mar 30, 2009 11:29:35 PM
,BabyTrilogy

Im trapped like a giant in a world thats more defiant and ive tryed to show yu love and that means your the one not tryin. Thought i was your precious treasure greater love noone could measure, gave yu all the faightful pleasure, put yu to shame? and waste my time? That would be lame, for the better of my heart not of my name, you did me wrong now its time to rid me of this pain THIS PAIN- TANYA ,

Dec 18, 2008 1:27:21 PM
.:Lil-Joker:.

The heart-ache is gone, I feel no pain. Sorrow has been washed away in rain. From where I stand here and there I have not shed a single tear; but when the pain comes back to I. I shall be the only person left to die.

Nov 17, 2008 8:55:24 PM
G2P

HELP G2P'S SCHOOL OF FISH BY JOINING THIS GROUP! ANY HELP IS GREAT!

G2P's School... Of Fish!

Aug 30, 2008 7:21:39 PM
Tomboy19958

cute888, i can help u
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T-19958
read my guestbook!

May 25, 2008 12:54:37 AM
Tomboy19958

I guess i didnt win,
my prize is a garbage bin.
:(
Love
T-19958

May 25, 2008 12:50:58 AM
princess12395

I have a pen my bobba blue
I have a friend my friend is you

May 24, 2008 7:39:48 PM
cute888

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May 23, 2008 1:27:41 PM
swimstar1234

written with a pen sealed with a kiss and if you are my friend please answer me this are you my friend or are you not you told me once but i forgot so tell me not and tell me true so i can say i am here for you. if i die before you do ill go to heaven and wait for you.ill give every one their wings to fly hoping that i never die there isnt a thing i wouldnt do to have a frined just like you

May 17, 2008 12:11:31 AM
bellababe238

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May 15, 2008 10:11:47 AM
gone-rotten

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May 6, 2008 4:27:50 AM
omg207

I FORGOT 2 DO IT!>:0

Apr 26, 2008 3:48:46 PM
Helper-Novae

yep it does any Earth Day poems out there?

Apr 23, 2008 11:42:48 PM
reychz09

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Mar 17, 2008 11:18:28 AM

Habbo Poetry [Remake]

Group created: Feb 12, 2008

139 members

We all know that they didn't read ALL the poetry in the Valentine's Day poetry competition. So I'm giving everyone a fair chance. I'm actually going to read all of the poems and decide who wins prizes based on the poems. Get rhymin'!